addiction
the knowing subservience to a harmful substance
the knowledge but none of the power
crack smack smoke dope
it's all the same
a quest for the increasingly elusive rush
running down the slippery slope
alcohol weed sex
the pinnacle of self-destruction
just to escape the imagined nadir
the willing enslavement of soul
for the fleeting freedom of impure
adulterated
bliss.
the knowledge but none of the power
crack smack smoke dope
it's all the same
a quest for the increasingly elusive rush
running down the slippery slope
alcohol weed sex
the pinnacle of self-destruction
just to escape the imagined nadir
the willing enslavement of soul
for the fleeting freedom of impure
adulterated
bliss.
posted by bastard @ 00:38
2 Comments:
At 11/9/05 00:12,
Joie said…
Not that I can suggest how to fix it, but the lines "crack smack smoke dope/it's all the same" is really jerky and awkward. Needs a rewrite.
At 11/9/05 12:06,
bastard said…
hmmm. actually. the crack line was supposed to be jerky. in a rhyme ish kinda way.
you really think it needs reworking? i'll mull on it.
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